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Saturday, 15 February 2025

Chapbook: Chapter Two & Three

 This is my First Draft of Chapter Two   the backstory here becomes a little more complex however I think it is necessary to give depth and meaning to the third chapter - this certainly won't be the end of the story but as much as can be written for this chapbook. 

A map of Canada is needed here... The location of the Pelican case is here but where is Mika?


Who is Mika?  The First Draft of the Third Chapter is here set at the University of British Columbia Nitobi Gardens



After considering the second chapter I adjusted some phrases and corrected errors but essentially kept the content the same so this is the Second Draft of the Second Chapter

The third chapter needed more detail and depth so I added this as like the first chapter I wanted Mika's character and life to start to emerge.  This is the Second Draft of the Third Chapter

I have researched for both these chapters the relations between Canada and Japan in the Cold War era.  For the third chapter, I researched the place above where Mika lives in Canada. 

These three chapters are the set up or a much longer story but I am hoping they will work and that as the reader, it leaves you wanting more. 

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